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OK... This is my first design and i'm accepting your comments... Cos they are gonna encourage me to do more design..
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cynicdesign Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Professional Interface Designer
What about movement of the eye?

The face is the focal point- which a human face will always, always be in any composition- but it seems like you might want the name to be more focal.
I guess that would depend on the utility of the piece, but it seems like if you're going to put the company name in there then you would want that to carry weight.

I think this piece could benefit from some more visual connection or movement that brings the face and the name together.

If anything the diagonal series of shapes in the background seem to visually bisect the image.

Looking at your other work I'd say you have a better design in you.

Keep me posted with the update.
-jw
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UniDesignStudio Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2008  Professional Interface Designer
hai Jason! I guess your right i have to do something more on this. Anyway Thanks for your advice :aww:
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Syko211 Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008   Interface Designer
Darken the text just a lil, nice job overall.
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UniDesignStudio Featured By Owner Jan 15, 2008  Professional Interface Designer
ya ur right!! thanks!! :)
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Bheeshoom Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
looks good!! but i think.. instead of PS background.. u should try any grunge paper or grunge wall.. just try.. :) also try dark bg if possible..

great effect though!!
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UniDesignStudio Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
hm.......your right this is too white.... i better use some colors on it... Hay i like your gallery....specially life till date....
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Bheeshoom Featured By Owner Sep 4, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
cool!! n thanx alot!!
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chathurank Featured By Owner Aug 18, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
Nice design :)
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UniDesignStudio Featured By Owner Aug 19, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
thanks!
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eteamlanka Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2007  Professional Photographer
the photoshop texture is perfectly done..
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UniDesignStudio Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2007  Professional Interface Designer
thanx!
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eteamlanka Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2007  Professional Photographer
:D
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